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on the rocks

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(lauren)

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suicide is such a pretty word
she liked the way it rolled right off her tongue
under the bed to hide out for awhile
it can't be seen but if you listen, it is heard
a silent sigh the
arching of her back
hazy eyes and the
hope that you'll retract
to where it's dark and
find her reaching out
she says the words
over and over again

i love the way you pout your lower lip
and crease your brow the jutting of your hip
i think it's nice when you spin me a spin me around
but don't be mad when i never wanna come down

come down
to

suicide is such a pretty word
she said she lied awake upside high strung
right up the walls and you won't find her there
it can't be seen and no it can't be heard
a bitter laugh the
drumming of her nails
it was a trap
incase that you came back
to where she crawls along the tiled floor
and leaves a trail its
thickening every time

i hate it when you look at me that way
and bite your tongue with nothing much to say
i think i'll fall when you spin me a spin me around
i'll suck it in and you're just counting down

count down
to

under the bed to hide out for awhile
right up the walls and dragged across the tile
into the streets so you can close the door
i'll arch my back and fall right through the floor
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daveainley's avatar
oh wow. the rocks in here make for an EXCELLENT birds eye view... they really add a lot. good thinking.

=daveainley :spidey: